再發白目英文詩一首<The "dim life" that you have, and me too>

[姓韓者 11]

A deaf space with a blind dark

My thinking freezes in a gloomy mud

-- A world you can have too--

That’s dream, and I felt

I was in a flood

Something is coming but I still keep my head

In the warm

Then the voice comes from far

My nerves get up with a word

I say: “f**k!!!”

--An airplane wakes me

From South China

Again, face to face

That wretched glass

On the mirror by looking at my stinking mouth

They now need brush and dentifrice

Exactly these two things

And then hold a bloody rag

Fibers remember what I look like

Therefore, I prepare a cup

I pour out all the coldness

Of refrigerator, without the breads

I fill up my mouth

I look at my phone—7.55 A.M.

Three minutes after, the school bus would come

Eventually start to run

Forget the key which is

Leaving at the front, and put myself

Into the procedure of our life

Wake up, brushing, eating and leave.

-- By tomorrow, by the day after day

Or even by the future in the whole life

xd

[姓韓者 11]

自評，韻腳抓得還好，内容營養不良，開頭龍飛鳳舞，後面亂七八糟...T_T

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