knight78x 10 Posted April 27, 2005 Report Share Posted April 27, 2005 最初由 樂天小熊 發表我也覺得故事沒完全交代清楚.............(論壇訊息:引文過長 恕刪) 這種故事總是這樣•••什麼都交代的清清楚楚的話，就沒有想像空間了啊！一_一狠 :D :o Link to post Share on other sites
木龍子 10 Posted May 13, 2005 Report Share Posted May 13, 2005 ＞＜我滴頭皮發麻哩∼∼嗚嗚嗚∼∼ Link to post Share on other sites
阿頭 10 Posted May 14, 2005 Report Share Posted May 14, 2005 好討厭這樣的感覺...毛斃了:'( Link to post Share on other sites
Greenano 10 Posted May 14, 2005 Report Share Posted May 14, 2005 我是在電腦課慢慢的看完它的..這樣就沒這麼可怕了.... Link to post Share on other sites
小rabbit 10 Posted May 22, 2005 Report Share Posted May 22, 2005 看了好久終於看完了...這篇故事很精采，不禁令人打冷顫... Link to post Share on other sites
笨笨滴ㄚ豬 10 Posted May 25, 2005 Report Share Posted May 25, 2005 很毛...而且現在我全家都睡了..剩我一個人在看這個我也快去睡好了><" Link to post Share on other sites
喜歡˙簡單 10 Posted May 27, 2005 Report Share Posted May 27, 2005 毛死我了啦....好可怕喔 Link to post Share on other sites
星夜呢喃 10 Posted May 30, 2005 Report Share Posted May 30, 2005 還真的怪恐怖的... Link to post Share on other sites
kevin75124 10 Posted June 12, 2005 Report Share Posted June 12, 2005 最初由 樂天小熊 發表我也覺得故事沒完全交代清楚.............(論壇訊息:引文過長 恕刪) 我後來想想,我覺得應該是那對自殺的夫妻變成鬼來賣陶土給阿光!!不過疑點二真的就矛盾了...對了,我覺得最後稍微改一下會更好一點!!等到他們三個人都到隔壁去以後，我把門關上，然後抱著寶寶輕輕的唱著：「泥娃娃、泥娃娃、一個泥娃娃，她有那眉毛、也有那眼睛、眼睛不會……」唱到這裡的時候，我一邊唱一邊低下頭一看，赫然發現在我懷裡的小寶寶的臉開始扭曲變化並且冒出水泡而且身體像是正在燃燒的木炭越來越燙!我全身顫抖著不敢再唱下去……因為……我知道……這一場惡夢……並沒有結束……好像比較噁一點,小弟文筆拙劣還請大家指教! Link to post Share on other sites
missnoverta 10 Posted June 13, 2005 Report Share Posted June 13, 2005 ｏｈ ｍｙ ｇｏｄ∼好險我平常都有在燒香拜拜！！菩薩保佑∼上帝保佑∼驚！！太可怕哩∼ Link to post Share on other sites
~新航~ 10 Posted June 13, 2005 Report Share Posted June 13, 2005 噁∼好好看唷。。。。又精采∼有被嚇到＝ ＝ｂ Link to post Share on other sites
winnie19880503 10 Posted June 14, 2005 Report Share Posted June 14, 2005 等到他們三個人都到隔壁去以後，我把門關上，然後抱著寶寶輕輕的唱著：「泥娃娃、泥娃娃、一個泥娃娃，她有那眉毛、也有那眼睛、眼睛不會……」唱到這裡的時候，我一邊唱一邊低下頭一看，赫然發現在我懷裡的小寶寶的臉開始扭曲變化並且冒出水泡而且身體像是正在燃燒的木炭越來越燙!我全身顫抖著不敢再唱下去……因為……我知道……這一場惡夢……並沒有結束…… 我覺得改寫的不錯......小真的確很怪，她到底怎麼和泥娃娃扯上關係的?而且，那個小孩殺人的理由也很怪，因為被燒死，所以就變怨靈害死倒楣到陶藝教室的那三個人嗎?(可是當初處理案件的刑警為何沒事?)，而且為什麼要仿他們的惡作劇也送泥娃娃?爲什麼要七天?符和陶娃娃又是出自誰手?到底泥娃娃和那小孩的關係為何?為什麼它要操縱小真唱泥娃娃?為什麼它聽到泥娃娃會露出怨毒的表情?它只是被燒死在窯裡，和這首歌好像沒多大關係......我知道我這種亂七八糟的為什麼個性很不適合看鬼故事，不過還是很想弄清楚就是...... Link to post Share on other sites
kevin75124 10 Posted June 14, 2005 Report Share Posted June 14, 2005 最初由 winnie19880503 發表等到他們三個人都到隔壁去以後，我把門關上，然後抱著寶寶輕輕的唱著：「泥娃娃、泥娃娃、一個泥娃娃，她有那眉毛、也有那眼睛、眼睛不會……」唱到這裡的時候，我一邊唱一邊低下頭一看，赫然發現在我懷.............(論壇訊息:引文過長 恕刪) 這....問的真是鞭闢入理阿!我以為我已經想的夠多了....@@"還有謝謝誇獎阿!!xd Link to post Share on other sites
這次夠短了吧 10 Posted June 17, 2005 Report Share Posted June 17, 2005 喔喔．．毛毛的＝ ＝現在是半夜啊:'( Link to post Share on other sites
Ya-Yi 10 Posted June 18, 2005 Report Share Posted June 18, 2005 恐怖呀~~!! Link to post Share on other sites
小燕子﹏〃☆ 10 Posted June 18, 2005 Report Share Posted June 18, 2005 我的天阿...我快要嚇死哩...怎麼那麼毛... Link to post Share on other sites
易開罐 10 Posted June 19, 2005 Report Share Posted June 19, 2005 看完以後好毛喔..!!!我覺得聽到有人唱兒哥都是超級可怕得~!!尤其在晚上...還有運球聲音...笑聲....~!! Link to post Share on other sites
㊣小仟㊣ 10 Posted June 25, 2005 Report Share Posted June 25, 2005 雞皮哥搭斗起來惹><"好恐怖辣!! Link to post Share on other sites
星無塵 10 Posted June 28, 2005 Report Share Posted June 28, 2005 ...天~~真的超毛!!想當初還蠻喜歡唱那那首歌的說.. Link to post Share on other sites
Mithradir 10 Posted June 28, 2005 Report Share Posted June 28, 2005 我不敢再聽兒歌了啦................每一首都能改的好恐怖........... Link to post Share on other sites
小小鴨 10 Posted July 9, 2005 Report Share Posted July 9, 2005 超級好看的毛到最高點!!! Link to post Share on other sites
尋尋懿楽 10 Posted July 17, 2005 Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 恐怖！~既刺激又害怕~ Link to post Share on other sites
lys0929 10 Posted July 23, 2005 Report Share Posted July 23, 2005 我在也不要唱泥娃娃了.....= = Link to post Share on other sites
winnie19880503 10 Posted July 26, 2005 Report Share Posted July 26, 2005 我在誠品有看到"泥娃娃傳說"的書耶!(封面感覺陰陰的)雖然我覺得它的篇幅好像還不到出書的長度...... Link to post Share on other sites
cynthia_me 10 Posted July 29, 2005 Report Share Posted July 29, 2005 好毛喔...我家現在只有我一個人耶..." Link to post Share on other sites
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