【Chat】 What do you think of this poem?

[RPC 10]

Why trouble the calm waters?

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Why trouble the calm waters?

The placid stream flowed on without a ripple/ quasi transparent glass that mirrors

Watch/ your step

It may not withstand disturbance

Set a foot in/ the supernatant churns and lingers

God knows when it will return

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An eerie music/ the cacophony of alien feathered beings/ reverberated the silent woods

The holy tranquility was sliced/ into pieces/

by the razor of their flights/ (and bore unrest)

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They are falling/the leaves/ still in their greens

Without the contentment of autumn/ sigh upon what they had yet to live

Turned yellow before they are reddened

Returned to the roots before attaching to the treetop sunshine

But then/ it still would shine and so should rain

Seasons coming back again/ and again

Stronger than ever/ live out the lives that had yet to live

7/8~7/9

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None of my friends got it right (what it is about),

but I guess it's just the matter of the point of view.

'anyone here who would like to share their opinions?

PS. The answers are on my blog

PS. If any part of this topic has a toe out of line, the bulletin manager has all rights to modify or delete it.

此內容已被編輯, March 18, 2011 ,由 Sunriz

[狂傲墨客X 10]

Well, it surely is an outstanding poet.

Maybe it's the footsteps that trouble the steady calm waters, though they don't mean it.