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從來沒見過那麼深的墨啊

在宣紙上散開...

沒吐出來的話

今生也沒機會

一朵花的生命

也就這麼一個月,漸漸消逝

漸漸消失在那個沒說過再見的路上

因而情感很是痛苦

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莊子說過

道是無所不在的

越低下的地方,越能體會道

這麼說

腳下所踏著泥土地也有了

甚至是颱風過後的窗牖

難不成是我想要的嗎?

風雨前的寧靜

影子越來越矮了

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再越低下的地方,越能體會道

挑個錯字

應該是在

用"在"是對的

但我倒覺得那個"在"沒有必要

會把句子弄得太口語

還有我個人看不慣的,就是贅字太多,

譬如「了」,還有一些連接詞。

+1

"了"真的偏多

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