【Question】英文作文

[ㄚ元 10]

Fortune - telling

When we are in trouble or a bad mood, who will we ask for help? Your friends, parents or fortune-tellers.

Although we are live in the morden society, some ancient jobs are still exist in the world, such as fortune-tellers. The fortune-tellers stand for a person who tell someone’s fortune. When the baby is born, the parents always ask fortue-teller for nameing their baby. When we have bad fortune, we aslo ask fortune-teller for a help. However, not all fortune – tellers’ advices are good for us and the results of this fortune telling depend on different people views. If we believe too much in fortune-telling, we will lose control of our lives. Treating the fortune- tellers’ advice as only reference is a positive attitude.

大家可以看看我這篇有哪些問題嗎?謝謝:E

[小冠 10]

Fortune - telling

When we are in trouble or a bad mood, who will we ask for help? Your friends, parents or fortune-tellers.

Although we are live in the morden society, some ancient jobs are still exist in the world, such as fortune-tellers. The fortune-tellers stand for a person who tell someone’s fortune. When the baby is born, the parents always ask fortue-teller for nameing their baby. When we have bad fortune, we aslo ask fortune-teller for a help. However, not all fortune – tellers’ advices are good for us and the results of this fortune telling depend on different people views. If we believe too much in fortune-telling, we will lose control of our lives. Treating the fortune- tellers’ advice as only reference is a positive attitude.

大家可以看看我這篇有哪些問題嗎?謝謝:E

Fortune Telling

When we are in trouble or a bad mood, who will we ask for help? Your friends, parents or fortune tellers?

Although we live in the modern society, some ancient jobs are still exist, such as fortune tellers. The fortune tellers are people who tell someone's destiny. When the baby is born, the parents always ask fortune tellers for a given name to their new-born kid. When we have met a bad luck, we also ask them for help. However, not all fortune-tellers' advices are good for us and some of those results of this fortune telling depend on their own notions. If we believe too much in fortune telling, we will lose control. Treating the fortune tellers' advice as a positive attitude toward life.

小小修改了一下...

我並沒有做刪減

先這樣吧...

[MikiRei 10]

Fortune Telling

When we are in trouble or a bad mood, who will we ask for help? Your friends, parents or fortune tellers?

Although we live in the modern society, some ancient jobs are still exist, such as fortune tellers. The fortune tellers are people who tell someone's destiny. When the baby is born, the parents always ask fortune tellers for a given name to their new-born kid. When we have met a bad luck, we also ask them for help. However, not all fortune-tellers' advices are good for us and some of those results of this fortune telling depend on their own notions. If we believe too much in fortune telling, we will lose control. Treating the fortune tellers' advice as a positive attitude toward life.

And I shall do further corrections:

Fortune-telling

When we are in trouble or a bad mood, who will we ask for help? Your friends, parents or fortune-tellers?

Although we live in the modern society, some ancient jobs still exist. One such example is fortune-telling. Fortune-tellers are people who tell someone's destiny. When the baby is born, the parents always ask fortune-tellers for a given name to their new-born child. When we have met a bad luck, we also ask them for help. However, not all fortune-tellers' advices are good for us and some of the results from fortune-telling depend on their own notions. If we believe too much in fortune-telling, we will lose control. Treate fortune-tellers' advice as a positive attitude towards life.

Ok - above was grammatical corrections. (I don't think I've made much change at all with sentence structures). Here comes a further attempt:

Fortune-telling

When we are confronted with troubles in life or simply feeling depressed, who will we ask for help? Your friends, parents or fortune-tellers? Despite living in the modern society, ancient professions still exist. One such example is fortune-telilng - the practice of predicting one's destiny.

People seek for a fortune-teller's help for all kinds of reasons. For example, parents might ask a fortune-teller to provide their newborn child a name. People might also ask for a fortune-teller's help when lady luck isn't on their side. However, no matter the reasons, an advice from a fortune-teller must be taken with caution at all times. If we trust fortune-telling far too much, we may lose our direction and ability for sound decisions. Hence, it is advisable to only treat a fortune-teller's advice as a positive attitude towards life.

Comments: Hmmmm, well. I tried my best. Personally, I'm not very sure what your point is. You also jump from one point to another abruptly which confuses people because we're not sure where you're coming from.

Anyways...the above's just a late-night attempt. Back to study....

[訪客 微笑的風]

你們英文都很好耶！