College essays

[ChocoEve 10]

在這潛水一陣子了，最近忙著 early decision applications ，想請問有沒有學長姐能幫我看一下我的essays。我已經給一些老師看過改過了，但想多聽一些看法與建議。學長姐有人可以幫忙嗎? :) (留email if you can help)

[ChocoEve 10]

I guess not? haha this is embarrassing. But to be honest, this is no fun job to begin with so I totally understand. :P

[evenstar 10]

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please indicate in the subject line that you're from DB

I will mostly comment on my impressions of the essays instead of on technical things like grammar :p

[evenstar 10]

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[ChocoEve 10]

Thank you! I've submitted my apps. :)

[愛力克斯 10]

If you have more due later this month, feel free to let me read it! =)

[ChocoEve 10]

Alex, that would be great!

Can you give me your email?

I got rejected from my early decision school. I can email my common app essay to you first. I'll start working on the supplement essays.

[愛力克斯 10]

just PM'd my email to you!

p.s. sorry to hear that you got deferred!

此內容已被編輯, December 13, 2010 ,由 愛力克斯