【Question】help me check my oral test draft

[寂靜* 10]

here are my oral test draft

I wanna ask you to help me check if there has any grammar problem or else.

thanks!

by the way,you can help me figure out the ending,too.

i think the ending is weak =　=

the topic is "food"

it's a dialogue between me & my friend

we have 2 mins for test.

A:where the hell do you bring me to?

B:well,just some kind of food restaurant.

A:hmm...but i don't know what i shall eat.

B:want some kinds of western food?

A:you mean the scary rare meat with salad added lots of vegetables?

B:ya~but it sounds like~well,never mind.how about Indian food?

A:gross,that's spicy,and you forget that i hate that kind of weired flavor?

Bkay,or tasty Japanese food?

A:what?there're lots of germs in sashimi!

Bh,what a picky girl!southeastern dishes contain a number of options,wanna try it?

A:that's not only spicy and sour but also too sweet,NO!

B:all right!shall we eat Chinese food?

A:cool~steamed bun,pearl milk tea,stinky tofu~

click me if you want Chinese translation

thanks for all your correction!

[shieiuping 10]

It seems that you left out a lot of auxiliary verbs(助動詞) in front of them.

By the way, you should put a space after a comma.

[cg6445 10]

Well......

I think it's fine but....

is this long enough for TWO MINUTES? I wonder.

I use my slow speed to read this once, and according to my watch I only use a minute.....

I suggest you can have a little longer then it well be good =)

[寂靜* 10]

oh, i havnt visited here for a long time.

thanks a lot, you're so kind!my oral test had finished before the semester ended.i didnt see your comments then.(i forgot it=　=) but still thanks^^

It seems that you left out a lot of auxiliary verbs(助動詞) in front of them.

By the way, you should put a space after a comma.

1.for example?

2.thanks.but why?

Well......

I think it's fine but....

is this long enough for TWO MINUTES? I wonder.

I use my slow speed to read this once, and according to my watch I only use a minute.....

I suggest you can have a little longer then it well be good =)

ha, you're right.that was too short=　=but i think it would be sufficient then=　=did it look not much?

[鯰魚崴 10]

we usually don't say "want some kind of western food" instead of saying "How about some kind of western food"

P.S:There are too many sentences that are written in the way of Chinese-English.

don't be dissapointed~~you can do better next time