寂靜* 10 發表於 December 12, 2008 檢舉 Share 發表於 December 12, 2008 here are my oral test draftI wanna ask you to help me check if there has any grammar problem or else.thanks!by the way,you can help me figure out the ending,too.i think the ending is weak = =the topic is "food"it's a dialogue between me & my friendwe have 2 mins for test.A:where the hell do you bring me to?B:well,just some kind of food restaurant.A:hmm...but i don't know what i shall eat.B:want some kinds of western food?A:you mean the scary rare meat with salad added lots of vegetables?B:ya~but it sounds like~well,never mind.how about Indian food?A:gross,that's spicy,and you forget that i hate that kind of weired flavor?Bkay,or tasty Japanese food?A:what?there're lots of germs in sashimi!Bh,what a picky girl!southeastern dishes contain a number of options,wanna try it?A:that's not only spicy and sour but also too sweet,NO!B:all right!shall we eat Chinese food?A:cool~steamed bun,pearl milk tea,stinky tofu~click me if you want Chinese translationthanks for all your correction! 鏈接文章 分享到其他網站
shieiuping 10 發表於 December 20, 2008 檢舉 Share 發表於 December 20, 2008 It seems that you left out a lot of auxiliary verbs(助動詞) in front of them. By the way, you should put a space after a comma. 鏈接文章 分享到其他網站
cg6445 10 發表於 January 2, 2009 檢舉 Share 發表於 January 2, 2009 Well......I think it's fine but....is this long enough for TWO MINUTES? I wonder.I use my slow speed to read this once, and according to my watch I only use a minute.....I suggest you can have a little longer then it well be good =) 鏈接文章 分享到其他網站
寂靜* 10 發表於 February 5, 2009 作者 檢舉 Share 發表於 February 5, 2009 oh, i havnt visited here for a long time.thanks a lot, you're so kind!my oral test had finished before the semester ended.i didnt see your comments then.(i forgot it= =) but still thanks^^It seems that you left out a lot of auxiliary verbs(助動詞) in front of them. By the way, you should put a space after a comma.1.for example?2.thanks.but why?Well......I think it's fine but....is this long enough for TWO MINUTES? I wonder.I use my slow speed to read this once, and according to my watch I only use a minute.....I suggest you can have a little longer then it well be good =)ha, you're right.that was too short= =but i think it would be sufficient then= =did it look not much? 鏈接文章 分享到其他網站
鯰魚崴 10 發表於 July 20, 2009 檢舉 Share 發表於 July 20, 2009 we usually don't say "want some kind of western food" instead of saying "How about some kind of western food"P.S:There are too many sentences that are written in the way of Chinese-English.don't be dissapointed~~you can do better next time 鏈接文章 分享到其他網站
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