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    My Summer Vacation

    Because of mass organization's reason lets me arrive Taipei Zoo once again. It is hot this day. We meet mass organization cadres of other schools. We reach the amphibious living beings library first. We see that a lot of living beings are such as frog's snake's turtle's lizard's. Will later reach penguin's library. Sees to many kind of penguins. It also has penguin's model. It is so cute. Finish arriving we had a meal noon. After this section of journey lets my impression profound reason is the elementary school freshman class goes has not gone to the zoo.

    Next year will elevate three grades summer vacations hoping is usually

    can study with the leisure must be able to balance. On the one hand accumulation ability, on the one hand lets the brain have the time to relax.