＊喵喵＊ 10 Posted January 1, 2005 Report Share Posted January 1, 2005 新新氣象遍滿街年年有魚是好年快快許下心中願樂樂融融共團圓∼在此祝大家詩的第一行字∼∼＝ ＝＂小女不才，不過心意到就好了大家有感覺到嗎？ Link to post Share on other sites
紫鳳‧冷燄寒 10 Posted January 2, 2005 Report Share Posted January 2, 2005 新春鵝毛又臨門，陳年舊歲隨黃昏。輕蹄快車雪泥踏，訴說寒樂與風奔。 Link to post Share on other sites
roger7386 10 Posted January 3, 2005 Report Share Posted January 3, 2005 尚未鑽研古詩功力不及實感汗顏若論文字運用技巧可以先從詩經.唐詩三百首唸起或是坊間有些絕妙巧對對聯可以翻閱學習和模仿 Link to post Share on other sites
＊喵喵＊ 10 Posted January 3, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2005 就像這個∼之前亂寫的：庭院深深深幾許，淚眼問花花不語。（原句）吾心愁愁愁幾舍，落夕悲人人更悴。（改編） Link to post Share on other sites
紫鳳‧冷燄寒 10 Posted January 3, 2005 Report Share Posted January 3, 2005 若欲學習古人技巧，可從唐詩300首學起，詩經還太早了XD。一開始當以學習近體為佳，真要學敝人再提供資料。(歡迎加入古詩行列^^)==========================================等等...樓上兩句雖是同一首詞，似乎不是連在一起的啊...(庭院深深一句是開頭，而淚眼問花花不語，亂紅飛過鞦韆去是在結尾...@@)←懶的查哪首了，總之是歐陽修的... Link to post Share on other sites
＊喵喵＊ 10 Posted January 5, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2005 最初由 紫鳳•冷燄寒 發表若欲學習古人技巧，可從唐詩300首學起，詩經還太早了XD。一開始當以學習近體為佳，真要學敝人再提供資料。(歡迎加入古詩行列^^)==========================================等等...樓上兩句雖是同一首詞，似乎.............(論壇訊息:引文過長 恕刪) 其實很多時候是可以這樣用的像藤井樹曾經用過：日日思君不見君，只願君心似我心。原文：我住長江頭，君住長江尾。日日思君不見君，共飲長江水。此水幾時休，此恨何時已，只願君心似我心，定不負相思意。所以嚕∼我只擷取我覺得不錯的部份︿︿別見怪嚕∼ Link to post Share on other sites
De'zuvia 10 Posted January 5, 2005 Report Share Posted January 5, 2005 從註冊是其可以看出我過年才出現的....不過還是來沾一下喜氣(笑)至於古詩...其實古代文人就常常玩從不同的作品中取句子組對聯的遊戲....朝辭白帝彩雲間一片孤城萬仞山兩岸猿聲啼不住春風不度玉門關黃河遠上白雲間千里江凌一日還羌笛何需怨楊柳輕舟已過萬重山..(好順的流水對....) Link to post Share on other sites
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