[Chat] What do you think of this poem?

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Why trouble the calm waters?
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Why trouble the calm waters?
The placid stream flowed on without a ripple/ quasi transparent glass that mirrors
Watch/ your step
It may not withstand disturbance
Set a foot in/ the supernatant churns and lingers
God knows when it will return
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An eerie music/ the cacophony of alien feathered beings/ reverberated the silent woods
The holy tranquility was sliced/ into pieces/
by the razor of their flights/ (and bore unrest)
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They are falling/the leaves/ still in their greens
Without the contentment of autumn/ sigh upon what they had yet to live
Turned yellow before they are reddened
Returned to the roots before attaching to the treetop sunshine
But then/ it still would shine and so should rain
Seasons coming back again/ and again
Stronger than ever/ live out the lives that had yet to live
7/8~7/9
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None of my friends got it right (what it is about),
but I guess it's just the matter of the point of view.
'anyone here who would like to share their opinions?

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[狂傲墨客X]

Well, it surely is an outstanding poet.

Maybe it's the footsteps that trouble the steady calm waters, though they don't mean it.